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The Little Mermaid first draft

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This is part of an Illustration class project I've been working on.
I had to design a cover for the story and this is what I have so far.


Hope you like it!

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Make
Canon
Model
Canon MX300 series
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oh and for the record I think her arms are actually fine. I like how she actually has some flesh on her arms and tummy instead of looking like a stick figure like SOME mermaids I know. it DOES seem like her hair is not very ... flowy. it kind of just sticks out. but I LOVE her dreamy expression. even if you cant draw the details very well the thing I think is MOST important is showing emotion. if you draw the BEST art ever it will still just look flat if you dont have the feelings behind it! good job ;)